Notes: Tianshi Disciple (3)

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The field survey has been completed. The following is an environmental assessment of the Yinglung Pass (YLP) area.

Levels of ambient Æther pollutants in YLP have significantly dropped compared to the data collected in Year 142. However, long-term ecological risks persist.

Several plants with strong pollution resistance have been identified in YLP. No significant contaminants have yet to be found in various water bodies.

Overall, YLP is currently undergoing a complicated state where natural remediation and persistent pollution occur simultaneously. We recommend applying strict restrictions for access and limiting various activities in the area.

REVIEW COMMENTS: Incredible. Truly. By this point of reading, I've counted ten flashy new terms. A full length paper of mine for HQ barely invents half as much.

RESPONSE: Of course, my mentor. I'll work on a revision.

REVIEW COMMENTS: This is the best written part of the paper. But it is also way off topic. DELETE IT.